Write a PEEL paragraph responding to this statement
Rimu is the best syndicate at TIS.
You must:
Decide on your umbrella Point
Give at least 3 Explain reasons, each with an specific Example
Finish with a Linking sentence back to your P statement.
Use sequencing words for your reasons
Rimu is the best house in the school because we get to use our own computers for learning and we are one of the best at sport.
In the past Rimu has come first with a lot of stuff even out of sporting, I don't really know what they did come first in because I don't pay any attention to sport, but I do know that they came first or second or third in a lot of things.
We use computers for work because a lot of us aren't very good at working on paper and pencil.
In the past Rimu has come first with a lot of stuff even out of sporting, I don't really know what they did come first in because I don't pay any attention to sport, but I do know that they came first or second or third in a lot of things.
We use computers for work because a lot of us aren't very good at working on paper and pencil.
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